Friday, August 10, 2007
it's been a emotional roller coaster.. everytime, i would wait wif bated breath.. i would hope and hope.. i kept saying "please.." but alas! wat a disappointment..DHAH DHAH~ WHEN IS E NXT PART OF YOUR STORY?!!? T-T
anyway, juz being curious.. currently i have 2 different stories.. which one would you prefer me to continue?
Remember Me ~Prologue~
She lay there, life slowly seeping out of her. She felt a sense of peace surrounding her, a peace she had never experieced in many years. Once an innocent girl full of laughter, she has now grown to be a woman, wise beyond her age. Reality, harsh it might be, always taught humans to grow up, she was no exception.
Her life was filled with regrets and misery. They worked hand in hand, making her lose hope, rendering her helpless in this society. She embraced Death as he came to claim her. To her, Death was like a long lost relative she had been seeking all her life. Finally, she had found him. Self hate created her desire to end her life. Unconditional love and unrequinted love destroyed her heart and soul.
The center of her world revolved around two men, one whom she loved and one who loved her. They turned her world upside down and changed her. Self destruction. Was it her doing or did the three of them caused it? She was uninterested in the answer for it did not matter to her, not now, not ever. She thought of the events that led to her suicide today. Of the pain, the suffering, the love, the joy and happiness. In the span of 26years, she had experienced everything there is to experience. She had no regrets leaving this world. As she succumbed to eternal slumber, she caught a glimpse of Jayden rushing towards her. Her heart fluttered weakly upon sighting him but stilled as soon as he reached her...
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Words Left Unsaid ~Prologue~
She felt an acute pain in her chest. Her hand instinctively went to her heart. She felt the steady beating and knew it was just an illusion. An illusion of a healthy heart. Any day now, she thought. Any day, my heart will stop beating.
She stared out at the sea, thinking how Fate had dealt her a fatal blow, rendering her helpless. She thought of how life has been unfair to her. Her parents had died in an aircraft accident. There was only her and her brother and now this. Tears flowed freely down her cheeks as she lamented her loss.
Words were said, hearts were broken but her heart was shattered. She knew by disappearing, her brother would be sick from worry for her. However, she did not care. She wanted to live life to her fullest and she was determined to do so. And so, she came up with a list of things she must do. At the top of the list, it was "Get a boyfriend"...
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so what do you guys think? personally, i feel dat i'll be able to continue both.. but Words Left Unsaid seems a little.. cliche.. or rather, gives me the feeling of bubblegum, teenage romance.. whilst Remember Me is more mature, more dark.. so wat do u prefer? sweet and idealistic or dark and realistic?
ps. in the event dat no one's interested, i'll most probably delete both stories.. lolx